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Mime College
Clown doesn't understand how to be a mime. WIP
Comments
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Paraskevi Koutalou
Interesting poses
Inacio
it has some potential if finished
Alyssa FitzGerald
A fun premise, however details like the orange character having suspenders that randomly disappear the purple character's smear lines being too obvious near key poses, the confusion of what's happening on screen, and the background stealing attention from the characters harms your overall work.
Richard Felix B. Candia
The beginning was great but at the end, it feels like an animatic or unfinished.
Spencer Bentley
While rough, I like the choreography of the scene as a whole, and the characters are expressive. Needs refinement, but good overall.