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Ghosts
I am currently studying animation at university, so far I have mostly only made simpler animations.
2 days
Two ghosts are trying to make friends with the girl in the room. They were not successful.
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Ben Zingo
the movements are very jittery and spastic, start blocking out the movement with a simple ball, so you can really nail the intended movement, and then build up from there! That should help cut down on some of the jitter. You can also plan out your mouth shapes/timing on the side, and then paste or draw in the shapes where the mouth needs to go on the ball
Alyssa FitzGerald
The eyes changing shapes the way they do at the end is a distraction. The pony tail needs to have the wave principle applied to it.
Spencer Bentley
Love the concept! I feel like there's almost too much movement in the faces and lip syncs, but it's a great piece nonetheless.