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the F-word
I've been learning 2D and 3D animation for 5 years
approximately one week
Psychotherapy in the coffee room
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Paul David Panganiban
First of all, love the render! And I looove the hand gestures of the girl! There’s just a bit of delay in the audio.. and I guess maybe make the lips more readable on the lipsync
Gabrielle Nonnenmacher
Great work on the hands!
Ben Zingo
the video and audio feel out of sync, but there's a lot of nice fluid motion going on. The dude's straightening up out of his hunched pose feels stiff though, I think because there's no anticipation 'down' movement before he suddenly moves up.
Nice contrapposto posing.
More emphasized shrugging/shoulder movements might help it feel a little less stiff
Richard Felix B. Candia
I think the lip-sync is off at the first part but overall it's pretty great.