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Faburary_Competition_Qiao_YQ
by Eddie Qiao
Description
In my imagination, this line sounds like an old man trying to tell the youth his experiences and express his feeling about "monsters". So it is just sitting there, talking and recalling.
Comments
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Romain Durant
More varied movements would make it seem more natural. Over all, good job !
Agnieszka Agnes Wojcik
I feel like you don't really need to emphasize every word with a hand gesture here. it's a bit distracting