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In BIG trouble
The father goes to his son's room to escape his wife after doing something wrong
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Seth Demeter
Very funny ending!
Romain BOYER
great idea, great story but the animation need some improvements
Connor Brown
Loved the robot voice idea and the overall story
Anthony
It's nice to see something other than a guy and a robot...
The combination of the guy entering the room and quickly closing the door, and the scene transition at frame 17 makes it look as though he's jumping through the door. There's too much motion and not enough frames to complete it all. There's then a sudden change in position between frame 17 and 18.
The lip sync was decently done, well timed, though lacking variety in mouth shapes.
Overall, it feels like there's just too much cramped into the short time. Like most of the stories on Vine...