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Drama queen
Description
A drama queen whining about how nobody pays attention to her while ignoring the dude sitting beside her.
Comments
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Erin Goddard
you have a lot going on here, and at some points I wasn't sure which character I should be looking at. You might try some different camera angles to draw the viewer's eye and that will save you some work with having to worry about what both of them are doing the whole time. But overall nice work, I like the story and her attitude towards him.
Henry
nice