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Lousy performance

by Antonio Marulevski

Final Rating: 4.23. Finished #77 out of 113 entries.

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Experience

Student first year

Time Taken

2 to 3 weeks

Description

One man, one woman, one performance.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Azi Stiles

The details in the backgrounds are insane!!

Nicholas Green

great idea, and like the perspective and angles, even the line work has quiite a nice style. i'd like to see more expression and movement hasppening.

Predrag Lazic

Nice atmosphere

Kyle Newton

This sequence is interesting. It has good visual compositions and if it was in the context of a larger story about the woman or the man in the audience, rather than the read of this specific line of dialogue, it might build toward a good narrative. But it spends most of the runtime not focused on the character doing the vocal performance, and I don't think we benefit from seeing more of the audience than we do of her.

Rebecca

I like the context lol