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Drama at The Punch Stand
by Garry Gray
I have been experimenting with animation since 2014. Training for about a year though.
14 days. 2 Weeks. Estimate about a couple hrs a day at most.
Some drama at a stand selling refreshments. A volunteer breaks down.
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Erik Romão
staging could be better. why is so much of the frame empty?
Vicent Matoses
investing in some more animation could have increased the punctuation inmensly
Kyle Newton
There's a lot of negative space in this composition. All of the action is taking up maybe 1/10th of the frame. Definitely zoom in if the acting is going to be subtle, or go much bigger with the performance if the audience is kept at a distance as big as this.