« Back to February 2024 Competition
Snack
by Madvaer
Description
hi
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Rebecca
I think you could push the acting a bit more at the end as she sounds more dramatic then. Perhaps you could have the character completely slumped over to the ground in fetal position or something
Nicholas Green
great idea, I love the way she slides down the food display maybe her facial expressions could be clearer.