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Middle Seat Blues
by Mandy Love
Rex needs some assistance with his low-blood-sugar neighbor
Rigs from Blender Studio
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Grooshenka
Funny story, awesome characters and great acting! It feels like the guy is competing with the girl for viewers' attention, though. Maybe he should've stopped pressing the button a bit sooner to let the viewers focus on the girl's emotions.
Erin Goddard
ambitious trying to animate 3 characters at once! next time you may want to try cutting to different camera angles to focus close up on one character at a time. it will save you some work and you won't have to worry about the 3rd character sitting so still the whole time. I like your story concept though, and the drama of the woman hanging over the chair reads nicely!
Nicholas Green
haha the guy trying to get someones attention to shut her up!
this is one of my favorites so far.