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thrill
by Ewelina
Description
My first submission for any competition. Please, share your thoughts and tips.
Comments
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Monica
You've got a good walk cycle down, would be great to see him change said walk cycle though. Find places in the audio you can use to liven up the animation, entertainment value is key!
Ben Ross
While the animation seems off to a good start, I don't know what's going on, and the soundtrack got cut off in the end.
Unless the idea is to have the character navigating a very dark place, I would like to suggest you include some context (e.g., background scenery) to guide viewers with the story and ensure the soundtrack is there till the end.