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Partyy!!
by Navaneeth
She's throwing a party and is very excited and but...
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ben malberg
Haha! Love the ending, really nice use of the sound and I laughed at her expression at the end. Maybe if she could move around a bit more with her legs, and watch the breaking of the joints in the back and neck especially around f253 it looks a bit stiff to me. Anyway, keep going!
Floyd
we thought there should be more reaction to hitting the cake with her hand.
Rosario Salvatore
maybe a little slow at some parts and your poses could have been stronger also lipsync feels off. I like the scene though
Diane Aarts
need to fix the eye direction at the end, her eyes should look directly at the cake right before her expression changes. The leaning on the table at the start works well.