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Crazy train
the girl sounds to be on a train or bus going a little bit crazy , so I made the same with the animation.
It would be great to have a critic on this, since I still will animate this scene.
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Raghav Nagpal
The best animation so far.
Marianna Farris
very nice! I think there are a few mouth shapes missing there though, i'd say you could improve it a lot by just adding them, I think it would look "cleaner"
Brent Forrest
I like your choices
ben malberg
wow pretty slick. Really liked the camera move around f182 when she's on the pole. The only thing that really caught my eye was she felt like she got up to quickly around f111 and into the next cut. Her mouth is not in sync with the vibrato around f200, it's moving too slow. Really nice use of the audio, great idea, and I like the confidence she expresses in her facial animation. Really nice work.