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Parteeeey!!
by kristin
A young girl is on her way to a party of her friends. She's already tipsy and in a good mood, so she begins to swing and dance around a streetlight.
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ben malberg
Some awesome drunkenness going on here. I like your swing on the pole and how she comes super close to the camera. I think some more time needs to be spent on the timing though it seems too fast. I like your acting choices at the end when she falls down.
Raghav Nagpal
Quite ok, but when she said to partyyyyyyyyyy, her contact foot was in the air. But really nice try.
Jesse Angri
Good, but watch the elbow popping.
Justin Jones
What's interesting about this one is that it really tries to push a perspective on the spin, but it goes by so fast that it just slaps you across the face with it.
Amartya Mukherji
Animation is nice. But top left corner of the frame, the mirror is distracting the action. plz avoid it.