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The last guest
by Svenja Ba
Just around closing time, the last, obviously drunken, guest decides to tell the barkeeper about her feelings. Although she isn't really in the mood, she convinces herself that she is "ready to party"... well, she isn't!
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john
synch is a little off
David Borja
Cute! I see your intent to make her look drunk, but some of the poses freeze mid motion, and kind of ruin the fluidity that would it more. Also some lipsync gaps.
Rosario Salvatore
I really like the fall at the end, the beginning and middle parts felt a little confusing and the poses where some what off I think
ben malberg
It's a good start but you need to make sure your transitions from pose to pose are not floating. Try to add copied pairs of your blocking to hold the pose when you go to spline.