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Over excited
by Mark
an over excited girl expresses her emotion physically
Comments
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Navaneeth
nice poses! good work!
May need to adjust the timing .
ben malberg
I think you made some good acting choices and the timing feels pretty good. I think it still needs some work on the body mechanics, it feels a bit floaty. I like the slap at the end.
Steve Schwartz
Body looks good but focus a little more on lip sync
David Borja
Great movement, but I don't think the poses convey the emotions of the character too well. They're a little bit unnatural, ie most women wouldn't stick the chest out as much as this one did. I really liked the snap and clap at the end, though, haha :)
Harry G
Not very fluid. It still seems to be in the blocking stages.
Amartya Mukherji
Animation is not bad, but too melodramatic. Too much pose to pose action, needs to be blended nicely. And the most important thing is, - the tempo of the voice don't match your acting. Needs a lot of improvement
Shark Bait
poses don't seem very natural