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Party
This is a Wip that I would love to get feed back on. My job swamped me with 12 hour days for 14 days in a row. I learned I need to be faster/more productive.
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Navaneeth
Nice work !!
She had her eyes closed most of the time..and in the end it feels like she's blind.
Would look a lot better if u follow a different acting choice with the eyes.
keep on practicing ...have fun :)
Moby
Nice poses and camera move. Right hand a little off. Great effort
ben malberg
Hey I like your pull out at the end with the camera, and how she's walking towards us. Nice idea. Definitely needs more work on the tightness of the poses, and timing/spacing.
Justin Jones
This has some interesting poses. The animation feels stiff in some areas.
Michael Covell
Eyes at the end dont look right!
Jesse Angri
Definitely smooth out your graph editor and get in some good overlapping action.
Steven Jones
I think the cut you have could be moved to right as the word "Party" begins. It's a good idea to try to cut either on pauses in dialog or on louder sounds or "pops".
Ranvir Singh
Nice, first thing is animation is flowty and jerky..and mechancal problems...
Amartya Mukherji
too many jitters . your animation needs a lot of improvement
hamid
very sexi and very active :D