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Birthday Party

by Jonny

Final Rating: 7.12. Finished #5 out of 179 entries.

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Animator

Jonny

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

4 weeks in free time

Description

Little girl is ready for her birthday party.

Comments

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Patrick Rossano

Really nice!

Tiffany Yong

lipsync can be improved

PRIYA RANJAN DEB

nice. expression can be more childish..timing is superb.. ..8/11

Svenja Ba

Good movement with the rocking horse!

Ejen Shafiq Isa

great job! the poses are perfect and cute. maybe the eyes couldve been cuter but awesome animation anyways.

Timmy Kwee

very nice animation!

Justin Jones

This gives me mixed feelings here. Everything after frame 40 is just fine for the most part, but the lip-sync just isn't there in the first 40 frames. I wouldn't think that would be something to overlook for animation like this.

Yuri Marcel Vieira

WOW! Best one!

Tobias Fuhr

great poses, timing and hold poses

Keith Sizemore

I'm excited doesn't read well on the lip sync, but damn the rest of the animation was superb. Bravo man!

Fahmi Nasir

awesome...

Amartya Mukherji

I was totally blown away.. I have still 127 entries left to vote, so it might be too early to comment. But I believe this animation deserves the Top spot. Top 3 at least.

Lovely Body mechanics and expressions all through out the shot. One extra star for that..
Only the last clap sound is not established in your animation. The two pony tail secondary can be pushed a bit more probably. And Lip sync could have been slightly better. It is very good, but can be polished further may be.

Eshan

Nice animation! Like the subtle camera movement.

Shark Bait

love the animation, but it doesn't really suit the audio

Diane Aarts

dang that's cute :)

Avisek Das

awesome

Nathan

Everything is great in this except for the lip sync of "excited" at the start. 9/10!

Moby

Nice movement. Weight shifts on the horse are fantastic. Well done.

Dan Harriman

Like this one! It seems you miss a couple of syllables on "I'm excited.." though.