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Unhappy first day at work
by Damian Pajda
She's ambitious girl and get a new dream job.
But her first day at work isn't what she dreamed about...
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john
very nice
Thomas Thoma
Good idea and animation. The shadow on the wall distracted me from her performance.
Justin Jones
I'm really digging this animation! Good work. My only critique is just when she leaves the office, it seems the door slammed shut without her even touching it, and it felt a little rushed there. I'd hope this makes top 11.
Neelu Tadisetty
Animation quality looks great! but i dialog seems more high pitched. But action seems casual. But i love the body actions going on! Great!
Valentious Williams
Ok this one gets a comment , There is appeal in you story idea but i think you could have exaggerated the part where she breaks the object a bit more , coloring the scene with some other activity at the same time could have work. .
Chris Tarrant
That's great, lots of nice little nuances. Love the BOSS picture too ;)
Ian Wallace
If there had been some audio for the door slamming, it would've been better.
Rosario Salvatore
pretty good animation, well done and I do like it however I am not sure if it fit the audio. It felt kind of lazy if I can say that
ratna
nice animation, bt the ending was really strange..
Amartya Mukherji
I liked it a lot. animation is very nicely done. Plus the actions are slightly subdued. its different from the rest of the entries
Nadia Ammari
The animation is ok but the scene make no sense
Joyce Makker
mocap in an animation competition?, I don't know how to rate this....
El Tabarnaco
Animation is smooth but IMO the acting lacks the energy of the audio, big disconnect between the two.