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The Warm Up

by ben malberg

Final Rating: 4.82. Finished #57 out of 179 entries.

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Animator

ben malberg

Experience

1 1/2 years

Time Taken

1 month

Description

A young lady prepares to give a big speech.
Others couldn't care less.

Comments

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ratna

nice!!

James Berkley

Pretty good! However the lady on the left is like a statue until about the last 50 frames. Her presence isn't really needed unless there is more of a reaction to the main character.

Lilly Durrant

The movement of the ponytail when she is spinning doesn't quite match with the speed of her spin but great entertaining poses though!

Niya

nice job... the ballet turn is way to stiff...it doesn't match the rest of the animation...

Michal Shukrun

OMG I loved it so much!!!!!!

Prashanth Prakasam

but needs improvement in the timing

Rosario Salvatore

the back end was ok but the beginning and middle felt slow, also I would suggest getting closer to your characters, frame in more.
The hair whip was nice, however the poses that followed seemed a little akward

ben malberg

Made with Malcolm :)