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1st Day
Maggie is interviewed on the bus on her first day of school.
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Steve Schwartz
This probably would have been my fav if it was done. Keep with it!
David Borja
Adorable character! I liked the polished frames interspersed, and the choices you made with her knees. Some of your key poses could come a bit sooner so they emphasize her dialogue.
Valentious Williams
Im so angry watching this shot .This had the makings of something really good but u had to screw it up by using a character that clearly dosn't feet the track ,Had you use a female with the appropriate age then this could have easily made it to the top .Simple things like this could make or break a shot .