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The Late Night Show
by Satyam Pal
interview of steve by steven
Comments
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Michael O'Brien
Not quite sure what the story is here other than a guy being interviewed on a talk show. The gestures tend to be very broad but you have some that add texture to the character like when the interviewer adjusts his glasses. Also, I think some variations in camera angles could make this piece very interesting to watch.
Michael Launder
the essentials are there, it just needs a lot more love! good work! really find some fun arcs and splines that can help fingers with follow throughs
Evan Helford
I liked the scenario and the overall setting. One thing I would shoot for next time is the camera view. It's a little hard to get a read on the characters because they're so far away. Zoom in a lot so we can see more of the characters. Also, it feels very pose-to-pose. Adding things like head-nods and small hand gestures could help a lot.