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witness

by mass

Final Rating: 5.56. Finished #26 out of 142 entries.

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Animator

mass

Experience

some

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

not much to say... hotfuzzz

Tags
2D

Comments

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Shela

Need to work on lip matching

Jessica "Jess" Jerome

animation poses are looking ok, but the lip syncing really needs work

pankaj kushwaha

nicely done good job :)

Michael Launder

i liked this one a lot! some of the mouth timings and body movements could probably use better timing, the lip synch seems off which is probably really hard to do in 2d animation

Megan Huggins

Lip sync needs improvements, the character designs and poses are good.

Gavin

Digital 2D or hand drawn

Martin Strom

I like your drawing style, the characters feels 3-dimensional. But I think the movements goes way to fast on them and the lip-sync feels kind of off to me. But you're on the right track no matter what, keep it up, you're good!

Santhosh Aradhya

Haha nice ! Though it lacks proper lipsync, but loved the rapid hand gestures :) Good Job!

Jacob Riches

It seems like the lip sync should be adjusted back by one frame

Fabian

I like much the character designs and the acting, they fit so well with the personalities of the voices. The acting is nice but in the final line, there is a little problem of timing. I would remove some inbtw when he shows his hand, in order to fit with that last line. That action seems off.