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witness
by mass
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Shela
Need to work on lip matching
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
animation poses are looking ok, but the lip syncing really needs work
pankaj kushwaha
nicely done good job :)
Michael Launder
i liked this one a lot! some of the mouth timings and body movements could probably use better timing, the lip synch seems off which is probably really hard to do in 2d animation
Megan Huggins
Lip sync needs improvements, the character designs and poses are good.
Gavin
Digital 2D or hand drawn
Martin Strom
I like your drawing style, the characters feels 3-dimensional. But I think the movements goes way to fast on them and the lip-sync feels kind of off to me. But you're on the right track no matter what, keep it up, you're good!
Santhosh Aradhya
Haha nice ! Though it lacks proper lipsync, but loved the rapid hand gestures :) Good Job!
Jacob Riches
It seems like the lip sync should be adjusted back by one frame
Fabian
I like much the character designs and the acting, they fit so well with the personalities of the voices. The acting is nice but in the final line, there is a little problem of timing. I would remove some inbtw when he shows his hand, in order to fit with that last line. That action seems off.





