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It's a Swan...
by Johnny Ling Yik Fei January Competition Winner
A man retrieving his beloved item at a lost & found centre.
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John Gomes
Good job pal
Niklas Bergwall
Love it! Good job mate.
Sebastian Ciubuca
doesn t match the sounds in the background!!! there are no birds in the pool
Mike Schanbacher
Awesome story...made me laugh.
Michael O'Brien
Great story, great punchline! Didn't think this could work with just one person on-screen for most of the time but you've pulled it off. I think it's just one or two of the acting choices that you might want to re-examine. For example, not sure why at frame 290 he appears so disgusted. Was that what you were going for? And then in the beginning when he's trying to look like he wasn't playing with the bell, not sure why he would be embarrassed/afraid of being caught. I like the action but maybe just having him continue to look bored would make more sense or else have him doing something a little more embarrassing/suspicious with the bell.
Michael Kristiansen
Very cool idea, and nice animation.
Raffaele
The best so far :)
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
really nice idea! love the push with the fingers and the facial expression at the end
Iain Wilson
haha creative
Coffee N Milk
I like his expression , look cool .
Sajid Ali Mansoori
Nice Animation but Story does not suitable with this situation.
Julian Chai
OOSOOOOOM!! THis should be the winner!
Martin Strom
I think this idea is hilarious! The animation is on the guy is perfect but the flamingo-ring lands on the table pretty stiff. The camera should be moved a little bit to the left side at the close-up shot. Otherwise, I love this, top 3 of the 3d-animated ones in my mind! Great job!
nabil
good
David BESNIER
great acting and good idea for the final sentence :)
Diane Aarts
funny! Didn't expect the ending :)
Annie Iglesias
Very creative use of the quote!
Jay Jörg Smith
Really nice. Had to laugh a lot! Last pose really is really hilarious!
Sean Kiley
Such a good concept. Great acting. Only part confuses me is his initial reaction to the float seems to convey its not his, then goes to glee, then back to realizing its not his.
Gavin
I love everthing about this the rigs the rendering everything!
Suyog Patil
Nice Work... Top 20
Arpitashah
superab idea and animation...i enjoyed
Ruth Agada
The fact that he was excited before he realize that it's a swan cracked me up. I love his movement. Great job.