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The Ring
Difficult divorce, difficult animation.
5 frames per hour.
4 days to finish deadline.
Comments
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Zoe Piel
I like the staging in this a lot.
Johann Wong
Pretty decent poses there. The overall animation still needs alot of work. Too floaty atm.
Luke Coleman
The lip sync is slightly off and you need to flesh out the body movement with some more keys in between poses.
Lea
You've clearly spent a whole lot of time on setting up the scene and rendering it - maybe next time spend a little more time and effort on the animation itself.
Felipe Navarro
its good, but the guy starts moving adequate at the beginning, and then it all turns into slow motion.
Ignatius Wong
Nice lighting! maybe make it more lively