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Random couple's fight...
by Debayan Das
A little conversation between a divorce husband and wife about their present condition turns into a heated argument...
Comments
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Zoe Piel
Interesting interpretation of the dialogue into an original scene.
Donald Marks
Good Setup, nice execution.... one note. That hair is made of helium or somethin. REAALLLLY bouncy. tone that back a bit. In fact you can just go into the curves editor and scale the curves down a bit here and that would fix it :P
Luke Coleman
Love the secondary movement and weighting. However a couple of things let it down; the camera position is too far away and combined with the lighting make it very difficult to see soem of their facial expressions. The last thing is not really related to the animation, but the shot of the reflection is too quick, if it were 1 or 2 seconds longer would make it easier to tell what he is looking at. Regardless, well done!
Felipe Navarro
Great story, i think we are too far left with the characters, just seems like a small space to have all the animation take place. Great work though.
Jordan Lewers
Interesting concept, and I like the animation a lot! My only gripe is that the staging is a bit off. If you give more space to the guy's left, that should fix things. We don't really need to see all of the pyramid