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Candlelight dinner
Peter is out of jail and he want to win back Mary, his old wife.
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Johann Wong
Nice! I :D Though, that part where the guy realizing about the missing ring, could use more obvious subtle moving holds..he looked like he just froze all over completely. The lady could use a little more slight changes in expression.
Abdurrahman Zhukov
Nice Animation
Donald Marks
Really sharp stuff. Love the lighting and rendering too. (I think sometimes we forget this is an animation competition...) Absolutely great set design too.
I think if you were to focus on some more exaggerated facial expressions (especially on the female) as well as getting the lip sync to work better for both characters you've got a really shiny piece for your reel.
Chad Cox
Love the acting choices. Favorite part is the hesitation where she decides to talk rather than drink. I'd just suggest pushing mouth shapes a bit more extreme. The "O" in "sold it" in particular seems way too subtle. Great work though! :)
Jesse Smith
The winner!! Nice work.
Sergio Montenegro
Amazing acting, excellent staging, incredible lighting!
Ron
finally some other rigs than that annoying AnimSchool one
Bharat Gour
should be winner !! awesome entry..