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I Sold It.

by Dixon Wong

Final Rating: 5.39. Finished #35 out of 93 entries.

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Animator

Dixon Wong

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

About 2 weeks, 3-4 hrs a day.

Description

This is my first submission to the 11 Second Club. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Comments

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Scott

There were a number of cuts in here. Try reducing that down to reduce jarring the viewer.

Johann Wong

Whole piece is already working, just seem bit floaty & lacking secondaries on certain parts.Tighten overall animation & lipsync shapes. Certain parts of the timing & action could be quicker or exaggerated.

Lea

Lovely - felt very natural throughout.