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Funny, I never got a check...
by Tai Beaumont
A few years.
29 hours (tracked hours accurately this month)
An unrealistically optimistic man tries to hit on his ex wife at a dinner party, only to be given the cold shoulder.
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Zoe Piel
Kind of cartoony, overly bouncy and zippy, which doesn't fit the dialogue that well.
Michael Bradshaw
Good Job!
Scott
There are some nice subtle gestures on her. The lip sync could use a bit more work.
Brad Bradbury
Great stuff.
I think they need to blink more.
I would have him blink around 195ish
as he contemplates her hand.
I would have her blink around 290 after 'it' (between phrases).
His Left hand doesn't feel tucked in enough at the end.
Watch her lip sync for 'check' I think you are missing the 'k'.
I would also adjust her 's' sound at the end.
Her double take happens twice,
and because of this it takes away the impact of them.
I would keep the first one, when he interrupts her drinking at 60.
The double rotate y around fr 240 is too much, in my opinion.
Luke Coleman
Good weight shifting, expressions and micro gestures. However the lip sync seems to be a little off.
Vin Liew
overall not bad, need more work on lipsync
Sergio Montenegro
Great acting! the lipsync kinda needs more work