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Bit Too Late
by Johann Wong
The man's finally getting his life together, until he realizes it was a bit too late.
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John Fielding
i see a lot of potential. needs some polish love and tighter lip sync, but your acting instincts are in the right ballpark (could maybe remove some poses on the main guy, he seems to be hitting a pose per line, which isn't totally natural and feels sorta forced)
Erin Goddard
wedding ring goes on the left hand, watch out for those details but nice animation.
Donald Marks
Really strong
Thomas Thoma
Beautiful timing of actions! Needs a little work with the lip sync. Some mouth shapes could use a little exaggeration. Example: "they tell M-E" , "ch-E-ck", "-A-E- sold it". It will read better.
Jordan Lewers
Love the subtle eye movements when they talk about the rings. Great touch!