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A complicated marriage
by Lisa Cooper
Third year animation student, no prior experience before University
2-3 days
A man and his now ex-wife struggle with the reality that they are no longer together.
Comments
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Zoe Piel
Odd camera choices.
Manuel Jiménez
Review staging ;)
Johann Wong
Tighten up the animations. They look really floaty.
Andrew DiLullo
Due to the constant movement on both characters and the awkward staging, there's currently no way to tell where I'm supposed to focus.
A F
Getting a nice '50s film-noir vibe from this. The lip-syncing and action (especially on the "they tell me" part) should match more, at the moment it looks a bit disjointed. Great work, though!
Kristyna K. Hrdlickova
OMG!! So Nice, I love the acting, how he realized that she is gonna say something that will hurt him a lot and already feels hurt.