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Paid My Debt
Description
A man returns home expecting to be forgiven...
Comments
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Johann Wong
Try some "moving holds". Bit stiff atm, but keep it up! :)
Brad Bradbury
Great work.
the last camera shot just isn't needed just have her leave.
His hand and body lock up right at 85,
I would continue overlap on the fingers/hand.
Add some 'keep alive' here.