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A mother's complaint

by Charmnanvudh Vancharoen

Final Rating: 4.68. Finished #28 out of 83 entries.

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Experience

~2 year

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

A mother complains to his son about how to live his life.

Comments

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Kelsey

I really enjoyed this! I love how the charm on her choker moves when she talks! I also really love how she moves closer to the camera! One thing i'd do next time is add movement to the hair. I understand its a time-crunch but It'd really add to this! Once again fantastic work!

Shea Donato

Really nice! The only criticism I have is the son's reaction to "planet" seems too dramatic.