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Oh mother...
by Thomas Dibet
Gordon had a mental breakdown after his mother refused him to see anyone else.
Gordon wants to be free.
Rigs : Malcolm 2.0 & Mery
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Howard Cameron
Missing the P on "Please". Overall very very well done :)
Alessio
Top, very nice !!
Zim
Mais où sont les gows ?!
William Barry Eggington
Wowa. That got dark quickly. Awesome work.
Murat Sari
nice touch with the cigarette
Amartya Mukherji
liked it. Nicely done but need a lot of polishing. The acting looks a little stiff.
J.K. Riki
This is a great example of taking acting to another level. The woman doesn't need to be gesturing like a mad person, and it works beautifully well when you use subtly. Nice work!
Shadrak Guichard-Foster
Love it! The only thing that bothered me, was that the gun seems to already be in her face yet she remains so calm? Was that an intentional acting choice? If so, it doesn't come across as such. Fantastic work though! Love her attitude
Grace Mojica
Great animation!
Brian Duffy
good animation but the "surprise" storytelling device doesn't play. you're trying to subvert the power dynamic between the characters for subversion's sake, and it's jarring more than it's interesting. focus more on serving the spirit of the dialogue than going for clever twists
Mananvir Singh
No smoking :)