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Gordon begins to rise
by Arkun
Description
Gordon's mother encourages Gordon because his girlfriend left him
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Ben Hall
The animation must be smoother and more in sync with the dialogue also we can't tell the man is looking at the woman
Brian Duffy
be sure to act the dialogue out yourself so you understand which poses make sense
Christopher Scott
The hands on the woman are like paddles, spacing is very jerky and the arms are twinning.