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Mother's Love

by JoJo Leong

Final Rating: 4.52. Finished #30 out of 83 entries.

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Animator

JoJo Leong

Experience

4

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Anything but the ring.

Comments

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Howard Cameron

That "Date" Expression is really well done. But everything else dose not seem to flow well.

Nicholas McCamish

I liked it! However, towards the beginning, the woman doesn't seem to have the energy that is portrayed in the audio. Other than that, great job! (I liked the handheld camera at the end, though I'm not going to rate you any higher because of it). ;)

Brian Duffy

the action doesn't match the spirit of the dialogue. don't worry about coming up with some crazy "twist" on the setup. focus on getting compelling performances. camera movement not necessary.