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11SecondClub1

by Taylor Lucas

Final Rating: 3.37. Finished #56 out of 83 entries.

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Animator

Taylor Lucas

Experience

3months

Time Taken

10 hours

Description

trying my hand at 3D animation, ran out of time though unfortunately but hey, next time

Comments

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Pavel Yakush

That twist on 159
Mery warms up before the dance )

Ben Hall

Looks like it's still in the blocking phase it must be smoother

Bria Muir

You've got a good start to something here! I feel like the turn from around frame 50 to frame 70 is too abrupt and makes it feel too jumpy? I really like her expression at the beginning though

Sarah Johnson

Pop lock and drop it. Get into your curve editor to smooth out all the popping on her animation

Brian Duffy

good poses on the mom, and good attitude. the shot of the son looks like he's hanging upside down. focus on imrpoving your composition.