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Existence
by Jack
Description
An overbearing mother tries hard to manipulate her elderly son
Comments
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Howard Cameron
Very simple and clear, the poses might be too simple. But the staging is clear.
J.K. Riki
Good start! Hope you continue with it and add in more inbetweens and polish it up.
Brian Duffy
you've got the attitude down, but the pointing gesture doesn't quite fit. try acting it out to get more natural poses. keep it up!