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So terribly sorry
7 years as a hobby, 8 months using Maya
About 1 week and a half
Mother lecturing her young adult son
Comments
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Baley Jauma-Hall
Animation is REALLY stiff
Marckus Duverger
The expressions on the 2 characters should change more, I like that you focused on the movements first & the staging is pretty interesting, but it's still pretty flawed.
A big problem is that you're moving the character around but not showing the weight shifting, when the lady took a step or moves her arms dramatically there should be more hip & upper body movement.
Smooth out those arm movements, there's some popping & sudden stops. You can use moving holds & the graph editor to try & help with that.
Your timing's not bad, I like the way you offset the arms. Keep working on it spruce it up, you can make some major progress if you spend more time with it & know that the body is connected, get more Anticipation in there as well.
William Barry Eggington
I can see every keyframe. That's not really what you want.
Pallav Sharma
flow missing