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Mother's duty
Description
Mother need to scold her millenial son.
Comments
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Baley Jauma-Hall
I like the jerkyness when mother says "...Date!" as well as the look on the guy's face!
J.K. Riki
Nice to see 2D work! (Why is the guy missing his head?) One critique I'd have is that the first pose on the mother is off balance. Fix that pose and it will improve the piece overall. Hope to see more from you next month! (Er, this month, I guess, since it's now February.)
Sarah Johnson
Really needs work on mouth shapes. Don't be afraid to actually open the mouth on big vowel sounds
Kelsey
I really enjoyed this!! Quite refreshing to see the 2D medium being used <3





