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Mother's duty

by Szymon Brygidyn

Final Rating: 4.51. Finished #31 out of 83 entries.

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Animator

Szymon Brygidyn

Experience

1.5 years

Time Taken

1 week

Description

Mother need to scold her millenial son.

Comments

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Baley Jauma-Hall

I like the jerkyness when mother says "...Date!" as well as the look on the guy's face!

J.K. Riki

Nice to see 2D work! (Why is the guy missing his head?) One critique I'd have is that the first pose on the mother is off balance. Fix that pose and it will improve the piece overall. Hope to see more from you next month! (Er, this month, I guess, since it's now February.)

Sarah Johnson

Really needs work on mouth shapes. Don't be afraid to actually open the mouth on big vowel sounds

Kelsey

I really enjoyed this!! Quite refreshing to see the 2D medium being used <3