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THIS WASNT IN MY JOB DESCRIPTION
by Gal Yona
Description
A late-night shift goes from bad to worse when a chatty witness can't help but bother.
Comments
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Elisabeth Janerka
Nice scenario, but the staging could be more interesting. The blond hair's reaction at the end doesn't really seem natural
Brown SamJam
add some ease ins and outs. Eye brows and eye lids should move together. Kinda... keep going