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Reassurance on the Park Bench

by Ryan R.

Final Rating: 4.34. Finished #52 out of 73 entries.

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Animator

Ryan R.

Experience

3 Years

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

Two friends having a small argument on a bench.

Feel free to leave a comment or contact me at [email protected]

Characters used -

Bonnie Rig - www.joshsobelrigs.com

Mery Rig - meryproject.com

Comments

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Pallav Sharma

move the lower body also

Jamie F

Be prepared to move more that just the head, even if they're sitting down. non-moving parts become very noticeable very quickly.

Raggy

The pose on mery is very unflattering. It could be saved if you picked a more interesting angle for the camera instead of dead on. There are also some snappy areas, perhaps your keys are too close together?

Arlo Karleskint

Loving the body language

Mason Jones

Clunky head lifts from the blonde. Also, more body movements would add more life.

Henry Barbee

Poses were pretty good, but transitions were pretty linear. Need more slow in/ out of poses.