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Walking the Birds

by Ahmad Habash

Final Rating: 5.50. Finished #15 out of 52 entries.

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Animator

Ahmad Habash

Experience

15+ years

Time Taken

few days

Description

Inspired from a post "Walking the Birds" found in r/BetterEveryLoop on reddit https://www.reddit.com/r/BetterEveryLoop/comments/en92gl/walking_the_birds/
animation created on iPad pro with Roughanimator app with final composition on Adobe After Effects.

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Andrew Lawson

The parrots could use a little bit of bounce with their wing flaps. The style and fluid animation look great!

Ben Hall

Good job though I would have preferred a continuous loop of the final animation over showing a progressive version of the animation

Joshua Kaberline

Love the transitions. Well done

Alex Ang

It's a good animation that has nothing to do with the clip.

Yonghwan Seok

It would've been better if the birds are moving up and down and it have more storytelling

Adrian Petitjean

Its nice. But it doesnt really tell a story. And the music doesnt match the acting. Feels random

Ryan Woods

great job staying on model and perspective is well done. there are a couple frames that bother me with the man. the frame where his right foot makes contact with the ground and his left foot kicks back too hight, there is also a little jitter in his hips. lastly his right forearm seems to have a funny rotation to it as it moves forward and back, most apparent in black and white.

Victor Lemée

nice walk cycle

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto

Such a nice animation, yet you failed one of the objectives: using the whole sound clip.

Jamie F

nice cycle!