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Modern Western Stick-Up

by Studio 23 Atlanta

Final Rating: 4.41. Finished #30 out of 52 entries.

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Experience

Less than 1 year

Time Taken

2.5 classes to fabrictae, 1.5 classes to animate!

Description

A cowboy shoot-out for the modern age!

Animated by the students of Studio 23 Atlanta's weekly animation class, James Plyler (Age 11) and Graham Touchstone (Age 7), with editing assistance from Mr. K (that's the teacher)

Comments

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Joshua Kaberline

I like the stop motion aspects of your film, but I feel think it would look better if you add a few more frames to smooth it out.

Yonghwan Seok

Creative

Toni Alarco

Good try and good Idea. But you need to make sure to fix better your characters, so you don't "break the arcs". Check "12 principles of animation" on Youtube, it's a tutorial that may help you.

Adrian Petitjean

nice. I like the idea and the stop motion. In terms of animation, try to work out the timing a bit more.

Victor Lemée

Nice stopmotion, could add more weight, character stay fix in the end