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Music with Work
by soumen
Music is seen in every area of our lives but I have shown a piece of work through this music, how it participates.
Comments
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Joshua Kaberline
The animation is fine, but it doesn’t really seem like it goes with the sound.
Toni Alarco
You got acting issues. It looks like you are just playing with the character for first time. I would like to recommend you, for the next time, If a character goes to take an object, he must look to it.
Adrian Petitjean
Work on the weight of the character. And the acting did not make sense. I did not understand why he went to carry the box away.
Ryan Woods
nice job showing the weight of the item and can see him thinking. I recognize you were going for a more cartoony style, wich can be hard to act out. Even so I strongly suggest recording yourself acting out the scene to use for reference. this will help you nail down the structure of timing and posing, then once you have the foundation then you can exaggerate the cartoony-ness
Z S
The concept doesn't really work well with the music, and the lack of movement in the eyes and eyebrows make this feel a bit lifeless(?)
Victor Lemée
lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs
Tisa Rahman
I love the character performance! The walk cycle seemed a little rigid but the rest of the performance was great!