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The serious shopper
by Jomon CJ
this animation was done in few hours.i'm a student and this is my first time in 11 second club.so,i saw the audio and made a animation which doesn't meet my expectations. i'll be working well next time and i'm sure that it'll meet my expectation.
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Yonghwan Seok
I do not get the point.
Ryan Woods
more contrast for background! scenery is large part of story for this piece, and i could not see it. for closeup shots facial expression is vital, recommend more change/progression during this time. body mechanics at the end look much better, well done.
Adrian Petitjean
Floaty animation. Did not understand what is happening until the last shot (even by watching it a second time).
Start by going back to the fundementals. Maybe gather some reference to compare it with your animation
Victor Lemée
Story is not clear, lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off