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Yoo-Hoo!
by Jack Doremus
A man must make a vitally important decision at midnight.
Comments
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Melissa
I dont understand what is the challenge here..
Alex Ang
Very confusing, in these types of shots we usually see the character hunched down but that would also give it away.
Adrian Petitjean
Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals
Ryan Woods
expression during frame 90-130. i dont know what emotion he is feeling here and i think this strongly impacts the whole animation. also the nose is too active to ignore and too subtle to be sniffing. There are other ways to animate inhale/exhale. I would suggest leaving it still as the nose doesnt help us express. (maybe wrinkling the nose for disgust but thats more in the bridge of the nose/eyes) lastly he stands and raises the bottle WAY to fast. fun idea and composition sells the joke well. also good timing on blinks.
Victor Lemée
Take some reference for the head look and watch your arcs
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Idea is nice and animation is ok, but could use some improvement.