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Linro to Ancient Sky Garden
I have experience in animation from different schools over the past 5 years.
I started it on Saturday, 01/04, and finished it today 01/07.
This is about a character named Linro on an important mission to save the world by ascending a staircase to an ancient sky garden that will nourish all people around the world from a great evil that seeks to rule and corrupt it.
Comments
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Adrian Petitjean
Not a lot happening to critique. Could use a bit more work.
Joshua Kaberline
Animation was good
Victor Lemée
Lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
You cut off the final part of the audio. Also, for an animation competition there was way too much time dedicated to a static shot.
Tisa Rahman
I think he’s meant to be running, in which case there should be at least one frame where both feet are off the ground. There are some great run cycle references online you can use and Richard Williams is always a great source :)