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Rise and Shine
by Jessica
A slumbering dragon gets woken up
Comments
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Alex Ang
Lacks weight as it wakes up.
Adrian Petitjean
Check smauf for animation reference. It lacks weight and floats a bit.
Ryan Woods
good pacing on this, i can feel the size/weight of the character. the head shake concerns me. like when a dog shakes, the head guides the movement long before the body responds. so at its most energy the body is left when the head is right. also the end of the shake the body seems to "catch up" with the head so they stop the shake at the same time. if the energy is in the head make sure it is always the first to perform an action and the other less energy parts follow. scenery and light is great!
Victor Lemée
lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs





