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My own room?
by Kai Saunders
Description
Joy of getting your own room for the first time
Comments
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Andriy Hrymalyuk
There is a bit too much camera movement, in my opinion. Try to stay focused and not "fly around" with your camera so much.
That way we can focus more on character performances.
bárbara espinosa
The camera composition and face acting need improvement.
david
maybe add some blinks
Andrea Charais
Aww, I felt for these characters; I like that the older figure knelt down to the girl's level, that added to the scene.
Isaac F.
the core body animation is there but needs work with face and upper body animations